Saint Patrick

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WWBSWW tell the story in our own words.

Planning

Who St Patrick was and what he liked doing and what he didn't like doing

 - where he was born - what his family was like

He liked walking on the beach. He liked whittling his slingshot.

He hated school.

One day,

- didn't go to school

- went to the beach

- pirates came

- stole him and the other girls and boys

- sold him in Ireland to Milchu

- was a shepherd - looked after sheep and pigs (swine)

- started talked to God - trusted God and was happy

- One night, heard God talking to him - told him to go the a ship

- when he was on board, - big storm - ship grounded in France

- crew starving

- Patrick asked God for help

- God sent him pigs and an apple tree- ate pork dinner and apple sauce

When he was a little boy he didn't go to school.  He was stolen and sold as a slave. He was a Shepard to sheep and swine as he grow older. He climbed on to a ship then a storm came and put them aground and they were in France.

One day A little boy called Patrick didn't go to school, he went to the beach as he was running along grabbing little glistening white rocks, he suddenly froze with far, as the black pirate ship drifted slowly to shore. once the crew and captain jumped off they stole girls, boys and Patrick they sailed and stumbled upon a market in France. The captain sold them as slaves, Patrick got sold to Milchu and worked as a Shepard of sheep and swine (pigs) for six years, then he heard a voice that said ''a ship is ready for you''. Patrick ran to the beach and climbed on to the ship he sailed with the crew on board the ship for three days then a gigantic storm came and Patrick prayed to God then a wave took them to the ground. They walked for seaval days and Patrick asked God for some help, then God sent them some apples and pigs they had pork with apple sauce for their dinner. 

Swimming Sports 2016

Thursday was swimming sports. I had three races. In one, I was the only 9 year old in that race so I raced the 8 year olds. I came third in all of them. The races I did were freestyle, breastroke and back stroke. It was really fun. My dad, Sharna and Jarell were there. When my cousin Rhegan was swimming, she came 2nd, 3rd and 2nd again. After that, we had the junior races. It was Sarah's turn. She did really well. She got 1st, 2nd, 3rd and 5th. 
After that, we had free time. I got to dive off the deep end of the pool. I swam as fast as the wind to the other end of the pool.

The Rocket

As I anxiously stepped on the rocket, it wobbled like a long strip of jelly on top of the waters edge. I ran as fast as the wind. I slipped and flew like a bird head first into the sparkling silver-like water. 

 Yesterday, my whole class went to our last day of swimming. We went on the rocket. I did make it half way . It was super long. Red, blue and white was the colour of it. 

At first, I was afraid and then it was fantastic. It felt like I was soaring through the air like a bird. Splosh! Splash! the water went as I bombed in. It felt like one thousand ice cubes grabbing onto my skin.On my last turn, I got so close to the end.